Comments : Contradictions Of Irony

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Living dead...
    being happy in my sadness...
    silent screams...

    I love the oxymorons used in this piece.

    "in the dark light my blind eyes can always see you
    the truth is i always lie"
    I love these lines, maybe because I can relate.? lol

    It's another great poem. The rhymes were great, I liked the flow and the atmosphere of the poem itself makes the reader want to read more. Great theme, as well. 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Wow :]] very deep/amaazing poem :]

    love ur style

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Adan7777

    Kool

  • 11 years ago

    by Mattias Ostling

    Oh wow. So cool! I loved the oxymorons.
    Every line felt quote-worthy.

    Found two (very small) grammatical inaccuracies, however, as well as the lowercase "I" throughout the poem. I as in "I am" is always capatalized. And then there's:

    missing the pieces Ive found
    ^insert an apostrophe there, between I and "ve". "I've".

    the Godly Devils final whim
    ^Apostrophe after the "s" in devils. (If you mean plural, if not it's before the s). Like this: Devils' or Devil's.

    Hope it helps.
    Once again, *great* piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Lovely words, a deep poem which I liked a lot.
    Clever use of words.