This is so creepy! But every now and then its good to read something different and dark, it reminds me of when im in the mood for a scary movie and just prepare myself to see the worst....

This was great, u did a very intriguing job here with the title! :)

Mattias-

I really enjoyed this piece, within a small amount of time you managed to create a powerful poem filled with explosive darkness!!! I love the "ha ha ha"- that made me cringe because I could actually hear the creepiness!! awesome poem!!

Dark poems rock when written with creativeness.. Bro this rocked..Excellent

Hi

What a dark poem, love the story, good imagination