Comments : Cant You See

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    This is great :]]

    Cant you see
    they dont need you
    cant you see
    theres nothing you can do
    all they care about is money

    <<this reminds me of my family sadly ://

    great expression

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    This entire poem reminds me of what goes on in my head. Its truly amazing and I loved how you penned it. Great work 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is an amazingly wonderful poem! I loved it. I have had a billion of thoughts like this, so i can totally relate