Good poem. Just make sure you keep it to a poem and not reality lol. Nice imagery too :)

Awwww this is sad :( I hope everything is okay<3 beautiful piece I love it :) 5/5

It can be reality, dont listen.

Its a good use of imagery i like it

Feel like more could have been done with this one, loved what was done with it tho, and again i can relate.

Good imagery but i have heard the lines "let me paint a picture, a picture with a twist, let me paint a picture, a picture on my wrist" line before, but it was really sad. very emotional. i think you could expand on it a lot more to add some more depth to the piece. good write

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