I perosnally liked it bc I can relate. 4/5 =)

We have all been here. I feel your pain. xx

"I cant help but to know im gonna lose you
what else can i do to make you see the truth"
The first lines made me think this person's gonna die, and you don't want to lose him/her

"you have a choice to make
i have a feeling my heart is the one that is going to break
after all the things you said
they are going through my head"
Then you said he/she has a CHOICE. Kind of confusing (for me lol) Maybe this person's going to leave you..?

"after all the things you said
they are going through my head
its me or her
my eyes begin to blur"
Then you mention "her". Perhaps this is about a relationship.. He's going to choose between you and her.

"from the tears in my eyes
i hope it wasnt just all lies
i cant let you leave me
if you leave dead is all i will be"
I can definitely feel the pain. You love this peron so much you can't bare the thought of him leaving you :(

"I love you is on my lips
My hand wants to touch your fingertips
please im beging you to stay
with you i want to forever lay"
This is filled with longing and sadness..

"I promise you this
make the wrong choice im the one youll miss
Keep me in your heart
Or tear me apart"
It ended more powerful than I thought. I thought it was going to end with defeat, but you gave him a choice..

Overall a great poem and I really enjoyed reading it 5/5 :) Keep writing!

-X

I love this u hunny i love it

Awe

I love the msg..n op u werent referin to ua inside feelins.

This poem really made me want to cry because I could relate to it so well, :)

Wow, i love this poem. it gave me chills