by Clown
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Nice flow, the rhyming didnt seem forced at all, the over all message I got was that there comes a time when we all must make a difficult choice and we cant run from it regardless of how we feel. |
by L
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As the title says choice, we have to choose always, and that's a tough decision. I found the rhymes good. |
by Xanthe
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The rhymes were well penned, but there are some issues with the punctuation. This line for example: |
by Chelsey
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I hate that feeling of having to make a choice and for a few moments or a day you want to just escape the pondering questions in your head but there is literally no where to run or hide!....nice poem, I can relate especially right now with some decisions I have to make! |
by Mello193
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Wow again top notch. you have some real talents there. this one was really inspired. great work |
by Max
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Hmm |
by L
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I know, I commented on this one before. But I tetras it and so far this one is my favorite from you. |