Comments : One Last Chance at Romance

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow speechless darl x

    This is such a good rhyme poem
    Such a sweet love poem that left me speechless

    an ocean far apart
    together at heart
    like missing pieces
    confusion increases
    like a broken mirror
    none i hold dearer
    Beauty, will you marry me?

    My fav stanza
    Beatiful rhyme<3

    5/5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Wow mello :] sooo good!
    very sweet and touching :]
    full of emotion :]

    good job :]

    5/5