Good, the more poetry you do the easier the flow will come

I thought this was a great poem. Good friends are hard to come by nowadays. And you described that well here. All in all a great write. :)

Nice concept, The flow wasn't all that great but with more practice in writing it will come!:) I loved how you were very straight forward with this poem though.
3/5

Im trying my best. im new at this. i just started like last month. i really suck at writing poems.

Great message...I liked your lines!
Keep writing!

Steven

I agree with the above comments, the concept is cool and great but the flow is rough. Nonetheless, I really enjoy reading your poem. Nicely written. Keep up the good work and keep writing:)

If your friend is able to snatch your boy friend, you should feel lucky that 'your boy friend was not a true lover'. Once you get the one who loves you truly, he will never leave you even if thousand girls try.

Man of many friends, borrows stress. A true friend will always remain. When the sun sets, the moon rises. I think Sidh simply said it all.