by BlueJay
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This piece is amazing. Real lucky girl. I love the flow and the word choice is okay, bit could be stronger. The style is great and I love how clear your voice is. |
by BlueJay
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Okay, so I owe you a real comment about your poem. Here we go: |
by Ebony Hope
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This piece is amazing and it seems like it would make any girl thrilled. |