I really
liked it. Your use of imagery was done very well. With your
first stanza: I really liked this. Time can tell so many stories
it's amazing. And of course creeates new ones too. 2nd stanza: This was great. You have sad and then happy
times. Every moment is different from time to time. 3rd and last stanza: I really liked this part. Especially
incorporating the hourglass was really cool. I could really
imagine that grain of sand dropping. Great job. :) p.s. a little typo nist to mist. :)

Ok thanks for letting me know that typo error. :)

Awww this poem is so sweet <3 I really enjoyed it! I love the meaning behind this poem, and it was a joy to read.

"I relive every moment with you
Ready to create more memories soon"
>> I love this part, and the idea of reliving and creating new memories with someone special.

The ending was perfect - and the rhyme scheme made the poem flow well!

Great job! <3

Just a suggestion:

I think you meant 'leaf' instead of 'leave' in the second line?

I really enjoyed it :)

I enjoyed reading this piece, specially the last stanza. The flow on that one was the best.

Really a good write, memories are a link to our past and await us in our future.

Very good

This was a great idea to go with this contest title...My favorite line was " the hourglass drops another grain of sand " That line helped the reader to visualize how time just slips away :)