This is beautiful <3

Thank u very much :)

"Unspoken words shudder the glass that's
build inside of me,"
build--built

"You disappeared like the person I ones was,"
ones---once

"Should of know you were no good,"
I like the message of this line, but it would be better if you revise it to: "Should have known you were no good"

"No remains except for the memories,
Left behind is my broken heart,for you to
keep as a trophy,"
This is my favorite part. No matter what has happened, in the end there's still the memory to haunt us..

Great piece 5/5 Keep writing :)

-X

GREAT ONE=)