Barley--Barely
"Being apart of an
endless circle of love. The feeling your heart"
apart--a part
"Seeing a smile that can
change one's day, and ones life"
ones--one's
"A yearning for an innocents that has never
been there"
innocents--innocence

I personally like the message of this piece, but if you'd just arranged it to stanzas, it'll flow better and will be easier to read and understand.

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