Comments : Live it

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! I like the concept of it and loved the lines stop living by a blueprint and break free from the norm leave a lasting imprint. That was a clever use of words! Very nice write here girl. ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was a great poem. I really liked it. Gave a powerful message to the reader. Just sometimes we need to let go. Not be so serious. That's what I got from the poem. Just a little sidepoint. You spelt analize wrong. It's analyze. But all in all a great job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    This is really great :D it is similar to mine lol
    seriously we do need to stop overthinking it and learn how to enjoy life and not take it for granted :]

    great job! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Never take life for granted. Perfect job, great piece

  • 12 years ago

    by William Mae

    A really good write, we can't live life by being a spectator. Very enjoyable to read.