Beautiful!!

What a great poem:)
I love it:)

Beautiful piece!

My favorite part was the opening; so creatively weaved! the term:' trays of forgetfulness' was thought provoking.
And.. the rest was great, too :)
So much to grasp in here, Karla. You are brilliant!

This is wonderful, well done : )

There was a miracle for each day
of the week and my dream catcher
was hung over my bed, swallowing
my bad dreams.

I honestly thought these are good lines :D I like this poem, it really makes you think about. . . well life, and the people in it , love the metaphores. .

I am glad to be reading another poem of yours hun! I have missed your writes!
This is an awesome poem. Vivid and loved the images.

Awesome write!

x

It is an awesome piece....