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This is really sad..
I hope you're not really going through this. I haven't felt this or anything, but this just made me feel the pain and loneliness, perhaps regret of what should have been done. And this made me think of the steps I've taken in this life, and think about the steps I'll soon take.

This piece reminded me of some women I once took care in a home for the aged. They seemed so lonely and full of regret. One particular woman with curly silver hair told me to 'be careful'...

Back to the poem..lol.. I just wish you structured it into stanzas, so it'll be easier to read. Other than that, this is beautiful. Great imagery and metaphors.

Great job. Love this piece 5/5 Keep writing! You definitely have a talent :)

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