Comments : Skins

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Totally honored to write this with you. It was so fast, yet I was at ease.

    ~ Peace bro :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This style from you Abed is unusual for me to see, I am used to that starking ability to really capture me and those amazing metaphors you create,

    I don't know you, Timothy and haven't really read much of your work, but I can see that together you make a really neat team, I like the rhymes here, they were evident and strong but amazingly smooth for a collab...

    great work Guys

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    Aye, it was such a brilliant opportunity brother! Such a privilege :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh awesome. It is really nice to see a collab between the both of you. The both of you have unique writing skills and when you mold and mix them together it turns out awesome.

    I loved the rhyming and images. The idea of skins - being who we are in our own body - taking responsibility for our actions. I loved this

    Great job guys on your wonderful collab!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    The metaphoric Kings bond together--- LOVE IT!!
    This poem rocked Abed and Timothy!! From start to finish, you two wrote a brilliant piece, filled with a deep message that leads the reader on a wild roller coaster of thoughts!! well done!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Great collab, the mix of your styles created a brilliant piece !
    Well done : )

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Woooow I love this colab:)
    Great job both of you:)