Liz, Liz :)

Amazing how you ended that, as if a summation to all what you beautifully described before. I could feel the heat, I could feel the warmth, and the cold.

And the title is intriguing.

Very well written!

"It's likeyou are
trying to kill me and
then save me -
at the same time."

Beautiful imagery. It flowed really well for me and the atmosphere is dark. Really well-written.

Definitely leaves the reader with suspense... and its mysteriousness, was a good part in this poem, and I like how you worded it and how you structured it, pulled me in, with such deep meaningful and simple words..... very nice job :)

As promised...
I hate being on my phone when you post something brilliant...

but the title was really intriguing, I was thinking 180 what? Tears, scars, times...I never expected this and that was fantastic,

The heat radiated if this piece, such a scorching poem, really warmed the emotions...

well done

IWell writte. It keeps the reader in suspense.

Liz,

I feel like this one goes in relation with your previous poem. I still have in my mind the words "your rage fuelled my fire." and by the rage and fire I though it implied anger and so explosive. Then in this one I came and I saw 180 degrees and I immediately thought that is still kind of hot. It is a sad piece, I hope everything is okay. As for the poem, I find it amazing, specially because it left me thinking and I felt the sadness and the puzzling sensation of last stanza.

A side note, I would have love it if besides the 180 degrees there was Celsius or Fahrenheit just to add more to it. Other than that, Well written.

OMG Liizzzzzzzzzzz !!

I totally get why you called 180, just perfect title for an extremely powerful poem.

The mixed feelings that you get from the tone of the writer is so deep, its like this person is contradicting himself around you. One moment he acts with an extreme, then a totally opposite extreme comes over.

Woooow, tou made it vividly possible for me to imagine the whole thing happening infront of me. What a powerful poet you are, dear.

Nomination and all the hopes for a win!

Ohhh! I love this :)

Love how you did a complete 180 also in the poem. Going from him wanting to kill you, to saving you at the same time.

I could picture this as I read it. Seeing the title made me interested in what it was about. As soon as I read it, my eyes wouldn't leave the poem :)

Love this. But all your poems are amazing!
5/5

Please;
squeeze my
neck just
a little tighter,
so you can
mark my skin
with your body
as well as your
words.

I thought this opened up the poem great, it really showed what the poem was going to be about in a bang, it's such a deep sadness throughout this whole poem. . . and you've written in a way where it can be suspenseful with the short lines and breaks, I love poems like that. . because of the way I read it in my mind, it's a great poem

Awesome job , I give it a 5 (:

Liz, Liz, Liz You get better with every write. I simply love this piece. I liked your title as it doesn't give a too much away which makes the reader curious as to what the poem could be about. As for the poem itself I loved your descriptions and how you described the hands around your neck. You made me feel the poem not just on an emotional level but on a physical level too as I imagined myself being stangled as I read this piece - that is how deeply connected I was thanks to your simple yet effective descriptions.

5/5

5/5

4/5. I loved it.