Compaired--compared
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This is really sad. My mum told me things that hurt too, but it only made me stronger. Mums are really honest sometimes that their honesty becomes painful.. I've observed they're more honest to their daughters. 'Cause one slip, your innocence will be lost...

But, i agree. Sometimes (i repeat, just sometimes) we don't have to listen/obey, that's when we choose the right path...

Great write 5/5 :)

-X

This was very heartfelt and had nice rythem, and often the best poems are the ones we right while we are still upset. good job

Wow this is really a sad poem :/ not getting along with your mom or her not approve your decisions. . it's a good poem :)

A poem many can relate to, a truthful poem. It is important to do things that make you happy, I know that can be hard when other people tell you otherwise. "People like to tell you what you're gonna be," but don't listen to them, listen to yourself.

Wonderful write, 5/5.

mandy :)