Comments : With My Whole Heart

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    I love this poem but a couple spelling mistakes!

    In the third stanza- it should be tearing not tiring.
    In the fourth stanza- It should be first line it should be feels not feel. The second line should read 'To feel the pressure of a heart that has to heal'not To feel the pressure of a heart that to heal. That's all I see

    Its hard when you have to give your whole heart to someone. but in the end its better to move on. 5/5