I've never smoked anything before, but this piece let me see through the eyes of a smoker, perhaps?
I asked myself: why do people smoke? what's the purpose in smoking?
what i got here was that the persona was smoking to bide time, to try to forget, perhaps? or remember? it's interesting and thought-provoking for me, i like it.
The imagery was nice and sort of gloomy, and the word choice was just right to me at the moment, since I'm becoming more into simple poetry right now haha.
Great job, sir. Keep writing
-X