Hello. do you like this??

Really well-written piece. It's great to find inspiration from someone close to us. And yes, listening does help. With listening comes actions.. I really liked every part of it, but this part seemed off:

"Listen to the water
As runs through the creek
Listen to the gulls
As they fly and as they shriek"

I suggest you change it to make it flow better. My suggestion:

"Listen to the water
As it runs through the creek
Listen to the gulls
As they fly and shriek."

Overall a wonderful piece. 5/5 Keep writing! And yes, I absolutely like it :)

-X

And I forgot to mention:

"The Eath is waking."
Typo: Eath--Earth :)

That's what we should do, is listen, you be amazed what you hear 5/5