Ooooooooooooooooo mercy! This was teary jerking.... what a powerful piece...The creative way you wrote this just leaves me speechless! this poem deserves to shine!

Damn! This is so brilliant! The whole poem is one big giant metaphor it is awesome.
I loved the first stanza - what an opening. The fact that that this person has begun a relationship with you and given you all his memories and aches and pains. As though he has dumped his past on your shoulders. It is quite sad considering he was only renting your heart rather than something more permanent. Obviously the relationship meant more to you than it did to him. I could feel the trust you had and the betrayal he gave you.
The second stanza made me think of what the relationship was like where as the first showed more how it began. The final stanza showed the demise and I will tell you I thought the ending was brilliant too!!!
An awesome poem hun filled with emotions and heartache.
Brilliant write!

x

"I signed the papers
for a lifetime of love,
but you demolished me...." this line tells that you really love the person but he destroys your feeling...i love this poem 5/5

WOW!!!! Ummmmm just epic loved this so much I think it is my favorite poem of yours, made me a but breathless to be honest. Xx

Wow! This is enchanting and apt. I love how you described been taken for granted by a dear one, by incorporating the idea of a home to a relationship or something of sort. However, the subject has an unyielding drive to move on and start all over without getting into despair, that's quiet inspirational. Lovely use of simple but insightful words which gave the poem a profound demeanour. Smooth flow, this is definately going into my Favs. Tabarakallah dear, Bon Travail!!! ;-)..

I really enjoyed reading this poem
though a sad subject your use of metaphors were really good
I like the whole idea of your heart being "rented" like a flat/house... descriptive wise that is..

a very good read.

keep it up!

Wow! that was amazing... I LOVE the idea. Nice poem and I really liked how you wrote it... very deep and meaningful poem in such an awesome way....... :) nice work

I really enjoyed the beginning of this poem. I could relate to your words of nurturing a heart that was looking for a new home which was burned from a past love. I like how you incorporated the concept of "renting" and were consistent in the way you presented it.

The poem would be stronger if the last stanza didn't repeat the word "heart" so many times. I know that it was the emphasis of the poem but I think it became redundant towards the end. Everything was great about this poem until that final stanza. Just read over the final stanza and take away a couple of the hearts, it takes away the emotion from the poem, in my opinion. Overall, great job!

5/5.
Really beautiful n simple.

Wow! This poem left me gaping! This is a one of a kind poem