Comments : Pain Stays, Love Leaves.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Huh? Are you sure about all this? If you are, wow, youre one faithful girl, BUT be very careful on who you give that loyalty to. And uhm, about the poem, its nicely written, cool ending too, simple, but simplicity has its own beauty yknow. Not sure about the capitalized words tho, but its your style.

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Very good poem. I love you the flow that you have here.

    You have a lot of emotion built into this poem. I imagine that you probably got hurt this way some day in your life, and I am sorry for that :(

    My favorite part would have to be:

    "Use Your Words Like Bullets,
    Keep Them Coming Fast.
    Say The Things You Know Will Hurt,
    So You Know My Pain Will Last."

    Very deep part here. You are provoking the person to hurt you because in the end you know that is what they will do.

    Excellent poem
    5/5