Comments : Lines

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "You may change who you love
    But the memory of the one you once love(d)
    will remain"
    ---I agree. Anyone who has come in to our lives leave their own unique mark.

    A little revision here and there with punctuation and a bit with word choice would make this more refined and sophisticated. But right now, also taking in consideration your age, this is very well-penned. Great job. Keep it up :)
    -X