by Yrem Crish
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Good poem. Nice rhythm...good flow and the scheme was conveyed clear. Keep writing more:) |
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People can be very cruel and judgemental |
by Xanthe
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The title: Walking without crutches really captured my attention. I was curious about what symbolism you'd use with crutches. But could you capitalize the 'w' and 'c' on without and crutches respectively? I'm sorry but I notice small things today. |
by Silent Girl
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Really good poem :) 5/5 |
by DeviousCharmer
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Sooo true , nicely written :) |
by KRYSTAL B
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GREAT POEM :) |
by BlueJay
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Excellent flow, easy rhymes. Very encouraging and fabulously written. The title grabbed me simply and the piece itself certainty didn't disappoint |