Comments : The world as I see it

  • 12 years ago

    by Glenn G

    I'm not a teenager but I like your poem. I can relate.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shades of Gray

    Thanks! I read it to my Language Arts class, and they really liked it. They were surprised that i have such deep thoughts though...
    ~Shades of Gray

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Not easy to be a Teenager, a difficult
    time to figure out who you truly are.
    Most of us have been down that road.
    Even thus I am much older now I remember
    me being a Teenager dealing with that
    same feeling. Very heartbreaking your poem. Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The truth about Life, is to care.. Where there's no care, we wear and tear.. A living conscience shall do good.. Where conscience is lost, evil breeds.. Good job gem.