I thought of this when i was feeling bad and a special girl helped me up

I love the way you structured this piece. And it's really rare and inspiring when someone helps you out without expecting something in return. The flow was great. I like the simple imagery and overall message of the piece. Great job 5/5 Keep writing :)

-X

This is such an amazing poem! When did you write it exactly? Anyways, thanks for giving me a copy! Anyways, wanna know a secret? (I hope so cuz I'm typing it whether you wanna know or not.) I read it over and over again last night. I slept with it right next to my pillow. I hope that doesn't creep you out... But seriously, it's that good. And...do I know this special girl very well?
~Shades of Gray

Maybe the girl is also a symbol

Wow. That's the best way to describe this. Wonderful imagry, superb word choice, and all in all just plain awesome. 5/5