Greetings.
A short but expressive one you got there (:
5/5
Keep writing! (:

Thx!:)

Oh my, it is short, but you can really feel how down you feel.
"Someday, you'll realize I'm gone.
Someday, I bet you'll miss me.
You'll realize what you should have done."
I liked this alot. The flow is great and goes on through out the whole poem.
5/5

Perfect poem i can understand how you feel..