Comments : Crushed

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was a great poem. I thought the feelings expressed here was great. How even all the girl has been through she i pulling through and is going to move on. all in all a great write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow! I loved this! I thought it was written very well and I love the story behind it. How you described one being crushed by someone they love but then growing a little stronger and ready to face the future ahead. I like how the subject in your poem has a fighter within her! Sounds like someone I know. :p very good, I am putting this in my favs. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria

    Amazing poem.
    I like how at first--(like most ppl)
    who have a broken heart, or going through
    something that can break you, leaving
    scars...but then slowly heal by the end of the poem <3
    awesome write! loved.