This was a great poem. Really expressed a lot of emotion how you feel about that person. And you express your happiness cause you care much about him that you even shed happy tears. All in all a great write. :)

I liked this a lot. A quick and easy read yet full of images. 5/5
By the way you have a typo in the 3rd stanza and second line: "beautfiul"

Greetings.
those lines were awesome.
A 5-on-5!!
keep writing (:

Beautiful, that special connection between two can hardly be explained. wonderful

Tux not advised for telling me the typo.

Thx not tux. LOL

Great poem!Well written!
I loved your lines!

My heart keeps racing down this road tonight
The sparks from your eyes my pathway ignites

^^ this right here are my favorite lines from your poem, I found them really uplifting.
I mean how that someone can ignite the pathway from where you are walking, sounds as if it's your angel guarding guiding you to your destiny. :)

This poem was beautiful and i really loved your use of language and analogies...my only advice is on the second line to say" Always thinking about you with every (single) step" That way there are the same # of syllables as the verse before and the stanza doesn't lose it's flow :)