Comments : April 14, 1912

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The Titanic. What a tragey and who would havethought it would sink. to this day
    the truth remains to be seen. Amazing piece
    Excellent written

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This time difference Liz, when you post a poem early in the day, and I'm about to rest my head you always blow me away so I am left in awe and unable to sleep.

    Immediately it's the flawless smoothness of the flow and the simplicity of your wording that stands out. Beyond that you're story telling abilities are amazing.

    Liz, a great great piece.
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Do you know why I hate sad poems, because I easily get touched..

    Your word choice made the poem attracting, and flawless. Amazing poem, great job:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    My god I love this piece! You have such an amazing sense of the tragedy that was the titanic and you convey it flawlessly.

    I love the way you layed out the verses it makes the reader completely absorb what has been written and with the topic that this is in think it is just to pay attention in that way, i genuinely believe that that honours the ship and all that sailed with her and shows great respect.

    Simply fantastic xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Liz- You have captivated me with this historic vision of the titanic.... touching and heart teary piece....

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    The titanic was a captivating story and sad one as well. This poem is captivating too and it also shares important information to the reader and that's what I like the most that it was done in a poetic way.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I loved how the piece told the story of the titanic and I liked the facts you put into the poem as it really makes the reader think about what happened. This is a thought provoking piece that really grabs the reader.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by SMILEatHEART

    Excellent work! Im speechless.

  • 12 years ago

    by SMILEatHEART

    Excellent work! Im speechless.