Comments : The Longing

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Wow, youre good. Yeah, I know kiddie comment but thats what I thought when I read this. The emotions are written with simple yet colorful words. Real, unpretentious feelings are found when someone reads this. Great, really great.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Oh my gosh. This poem brought tears to my eyes. You penned this perfectly. It is exactly how I feel in this moment. This poem is beautiful. 5/5 and one my favorites list.