A powerful piece realy liked it .....
my favorite was

I am a rock--
A lonely pebble that rolls
in a valley of infinitely
tall buildings.

5/5 :)

I love this! The feeling that they want to be a bigger person than they are - like a skyscraper - awesome write!

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Your piece is flawless...great flow and fascinating...i like this lines..

I am a runt--
A lonely dwarf who trudges
in mud and in cud.
With no ladder--
no way up,
and no way out.

great work 5/5