Comments : Oh Glory

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Andrea, this poem is wonderful.

    I love the image of a tree with mirrors, a tall glass building with reflection! I love how even though you are talking about buildings and architecture you always find a way to bring it back to nature.

    Sometimes I am in awe at my surroundings when it comes to buildings, how they were designed and created. I guess it helps that I work for a construction company lol

    This poem was awesome, the flow was beautiful!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    The ending left me like this mm(_ _)mm

    "our union takes us to the sky, Oh glorious tower,
    allow me to reach the top of your building,
    and fall blissfully into that sensual fountain below...."