I thought this was a great poem. Really expressed a lot of emotion of a girl whose life seemed quite well until reality kicked in. Just so you know 2 little typos. giggles instead of siggles. And view instead of veiw. All in all a great write. :)

I thought this was a great poem, how you described going from youth to old age and being fragile. I liked the stanzza "but with age came tragedy, reality stole her smile, what she needed was a shield, for she was weak and fragile." It seems like the person aged but tragedy happened and she not only was weak physically but emotionally as well. I like the comparison. Nice job with this one!

Absolutely love!!!
:) Everything you wrote down,
is how life becomes.
GOOD JOB! loved it.

I love this poem! It helps us realise that youth is a gift not a curse and that sooner or later reality will catch up with us so we must enjoy our lives and cherish ever waking moment even the hard times and the pain we suffer. 5/5