Comments : The cheating tool

  • 13 years ago

    by *emmax*

    How awesome,I love the twist in this poem,it speaks about the prospect of pleasure as it mounts but suddenly its no longer pleasure as we know it but slolen moments of regret &disgust!

    While he sleeps in her arms I
    will long
    After our passion nothing
    remains-POWERFUL
    Only pain, only guilt and
    disgust-THOUGHT PROVOKING
    Once again[THAT IT AINT THE FIRST TIME] my body was the
    tool
    Of betrayal on another girls
    heart.CLASSICAL

    Once again...she is drawn to the pleasure,the rapture this man provides but thereafter her mind hits overdrive thinking

    Nice use of imagery

    • 13 years ago

      by Jeanie

      Thank you. I'm glad you like it. this poem is actually one of many bad experiences in my life with unavailible men.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Guilt confessed, is Truth acknowledged. Love is demonstrated kindness.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Guilt confessed, is Truth acknowledged. Love is demonstrated kindness.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Guilt confessed, is Truth acknowledged. Love is demonstrated kindness.