A very heartfelt poem!
straight away the emotion jumped out to me. too me it flowed quite well.. the breaks make it so much better imo

Was this for the poetry contest by any chance? =P

"I've won what most people want to capture,
I've captured a love-
A true love,
A breathless love."

the end was the best part for me
summed it up quite nicley!.. and keeping to the title

keep writing!
5/5 from me
truley a beautifull poem

This is a great poem. i love it!!

Beautiful, beautiful poem. I know what it is like to have that true, breathless love. I loved this one so much. My new favorite. <3

I love this piece
the flow is cool and the word choice is nice too gr8 one 5/5 =)

Love the last line it rlly gave the poem a nice ending
5/5
<3 salina

Magnificent poem, extremely love it(:
Seems so true of how love is :3
I love it. This will be on my favorites<3