Very good loved how u made the first letters of each stanza (HINT HINT PPL!!!) into the word suicide .. now like i just said in person i WILL drag u out of ur house by ur foot (yes like i did during school that... those times) and u will be living with me!!!! 5/5 too btw

Wow, it was so short and it really made me want to cry!
The imagery was awesome and I loved it
5/5