Comments : It Hasn't Been That Long (advertisment)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Short, yet so meaningful. They make you feel strong one minute, then the next
    something just don't feel right

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Short but detailed one=)keep writing and god bless you always",

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Short but nice poem...
    Well written!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sai

    Its summarizing a story that i'm sure many people can relate to.
    overall very powerful, and meaningful.
    Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Drawing a Blank

    Ain't that how it goes, girl :/

    It says alot with alittle and I like that aspect of it. To me, this just explains how we all really should be more careful, not to give our hearts away so quickly - that can end badly - as you described :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Loved how you started it by saying it hasn't been long since you made me strong! Flawless

    It hasn't been all that long
    Since you made me so strong
    Then made everything feel wrong

    Then the ending becomes sad saying
    Then you made everything feel so wrong! Amazing
    Knowing the person you thought kept you from falling apart and making you strong, in the end making it feel so wrong

    This was short but it was so clear on what you were trying to say

    Great flow and beautifully penned!
    Great poem5/5!