Comments : I wish I could have

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is a sweet poem. well spoken
    coming from the heart. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    For some reason, I do like the way you wrote this, I like how it sounded in my mind, so nice job on that, and this is a really good piece.beautiful and sweet.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Fly High
    the idea here is to reflect on the reflectable, a mixture of hopes and believes blended with trust.
    I am kind of foolish in my trust in other humans. I trust in advance, like I fear in advance. Foolish to I know that
    I reflect and loove you comment, like your are stating I like how it sounded, if that is the fact, you just made me a bit happy

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I found this piece somehow sad yet refreshing for your hopes are high and I truly hope that tree would be a sealing kiss with your love.

    I love the ending and aside from sad I found it also sweet and tender.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Everlasting
    Thanks for your more the kind comment, I appriciate it very much

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Hi love this poem, touching my soul

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks for your kind comment