I really liked this, your expression of being trapped but using several words to describe that feeling, what I like about this poem is it could mean several different things and can be interpreted in various ways by whoever reads it, so nicely done. 5/5.

I thought this was a really neat poem. I like how you used "ion" at the end of each line. nd I think it worked well that you didn't make the poem to long so it didn't get very repititious. And the meaning behind here was neat. From what I got is someone that didn't do much in life but they feel like there trapped sometimes. But it seems like the world is an illusion. Everything seems so tempting. But your locked away not to know what its like which is a good thing. Probably no where near but that's how it read to me. All in all a great write. :)