Written well. The rhythm, the flow and the rhyme are fitted to each other...i like the imagery,too..meaningful and the scheme is clear..--"It's a nasty habit to be young and feel so old"--very brilliant imagery...

--Cause it never was bad, it was always good
Until echos find their way back to this room
All those things I did to you
This broken reflection I bid myself to
>>best stanza in your poem..and the ending is good..whole piece is well-penned--
5/5
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Waw waw waw !!!oh man I loved it

really welldone keep it up 5/5