W O W ! This was amazing! I loved the imagery, and the creatively used metaphors - Also thought this an epic line;

puppets on strings the universe our master,

Very nice work! Mystical and imaginitive! Great write! :D

5/5

Thanks so much its my newest one

I love the metaphors, the imagery and personification.
It really brings the poem to life.
Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for reading it just came to me