Wow this is out standing the describing is amazing and the word choice so as the story
the flow good too
good job 5/5 =)

I love this. It's completes the other side of a rape story. Outstanding with your imagery and describtion. Everything flowed smoothly together and deep burning emotion drove me farther into the words. Amazing job.
5/5 (I would give you even higher if I had the choice)
~Kitty

Haunting.Very.