Wow iam speechless this is so sad how it turned to be losing your friendship cause of other person
the emotion is so strong and so sad
the word choice is amazing and fitting with each other
the flow was cool
i love this
5/5 tho it deserve more =)

This was really good, it hurts to lose a friend.
I like that you were able to incorporate rhymes whithin this piece also that the emotion of losing your friend was present at all times. Also I like that you told us What you are missing about him and how it was when you were still friends and how you are wondering what happened? What did she do or has done to end your friendship with your friend. :(

Losing a friend is never easy and it hurts
especially caused by another person
Very sad and nice written 5/5

Love it