I hv 2 say this is not a bad poem! But it didn't rhyme all the way through but all in all it was good u just need some practise:)

This poems of yours take me back to the
old days, so sweet

Such a sweet poem. :) I loved it. The words seemed musical to me. 5/5

I thought this was very sweet and I loved the idea of dancing in the rain it shows a free spirit and happiness in the relationship described here. I liked how you expressed your feelings for this person and thought this was very well done, considering you are a new writer. Great job!

I thought this was very sweet and I loved the idea of dancing in the rain it shows a free spirit and happiness in the relationship described here. I liked how you expressed your feelings for this person and thought this was very well done, considering you are a new writer. Great job!

Favourite poem yet!! Your a very good writer!

^^Dancing in the rain..hmm, in the first place the title catch my curiosity..well, the first stanza is quiet interesting, the words used was like dancing in the lines...as like your title dancing in the rain..lol:D--"The time is perfect the time is now"like it..
--Spinning and dipping to the beat of the rain
Flowing to the sweet song of the wind
With the soft pale light of the moon on our skin
This moment can last for ever
I hope it never ends

^^The truth--i like poems sound like song to sing, ..and love the flows..and the message, my God! so sweet and very romantic...

The whole piece is really perfect--fascinating!
5/5

Enjoyed reading dis smooth piece jus like d first drop of rain..richie..u r an amazin poet..e

Love it