Very sad..I like the repetition you did here..it gives more emotion and emphasize the feeling behind this poem..

--The feeling you get when you run your hand over your scars,
Wanting to open them again.
The feeling you get when people look down upon you,
Because you'll never be anything to them.

>>how disgusting to be underestimated and wounded by other people when you trying to be good for them...

--The feeling you get when your mother speaks,
And basically tells you you're worthless.
The feeling you get when the words echo in your head,
You're nothing, hopeless, useless.

>>yeah, I relate this, i feel hopeless and disappointed when we had skirmishes with my mother and she said i'm worthless...it's really frustrated..

--The feeling you get when you wear that smil e,
When all you want to do is cry.

>>That is really difficult to smile and show everyone that you're okay and you're happy but all you want is to burst and cry..and tell them what your feelin' inside..

---The feeling you get when you finally break,
And drag the razor across your wrist.
The feeling you get when you put your hand down,
As your blood drips from your fist.

The feeling you get when you remember,
All the words that were said.
The feeling you get when the last of you fades,
And the world finds you dead.

>>And I like the way you end your story, it completes the whole piece..however, whatever might happened don't do like you written in this stuff...writing is the good way to expressed your feeling but not of thinking about to end your life---it is the greatest mistake that never gain your life again..!
amazing piece
5/5

One of uor best..d feeling i get

What a man seeks, shall his soul find. Take your time through every option. From tears of agony, gems rise.. Out of nothing, special bones rise.. Him who laughs at last, laughs the best.. Re-consider... Angelic, as always!