Well this is amazing short and simple
i love it
The flow was nice and the emotion was powerful
i can relate that and its nice piece
5/5 =)

I like that you managed to keep this a simple poem, yet its emotional impact was great..perhaps i'm too emotional today?. i dunno, but I like it.
"I pretend I'm fine
Speaking the same old line"
--I feel this way once in a while. When your response always seems to be "I'm fine" even if you're not.. Sad, but that's reality.
My only criticism here is perhaps the last lines:
"You were always the one
Even when every ounce of hope is done"
---To be honest, I was expecting a more powerful ending. My only advice here is that you change 'done' to gone. It'll still rhyme subtly, and makes more sense.
Overall, I like this. Keep writing
-X