Not bad Paul. Keeps the reader engaged and never really tells who you wrote about leaving them the option to guess and most important think. I think it is about the earth, Mother Nature and us humans that at times are so disrespectful of our surroundings. Good job.

Job well done on Mother Nature

Nice poem i love the imagery in this piece
good job

Awesosme poem paul, it was good had some nice imaginary in it. . dont second guesss your self....its a good poem

Not bad at all, this Show's your love for nature. I like your word choice and the love you put in it.
I'm thinking this is about how we are destroying mother earth and how you want to help her out into being the beauty that she is or that once was.

You don't suck at it. Lately, I've been more into simple poems, so I love this one. The simple juxtaposition of mother nature and a woman has been used so many times, in so many different angles, but this poem (to me) stands out. I don't know why exactly, but just by simply being...simple, this stuck to me. Keep writing :)
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Great. This nature poem is stand out for its simplicity...emotionally expressed in natural way..and i love the way you used "my Love" in the mother nature...the metaphors, flows and the scheme is well-written..good words choice..make a 5/5 here!

This one was was amazing
I like the words that are spoken within
Yet the message that is hidden be hind the lines.

Great job :)

As a lover of nature and a hater of cities, I adored this poem. I admit I feel the same as what you had written here. <3 So beautiful, one of my favorites. :)

This is my first nature poem. I think i suck at them but i still tried. Props to you for trying!!! and i dont think you suck as well...
I liked the duality of this poem, horticulture/ a woman. wonderful concept! however the way you worded each line was horrible. like half of one line was above where it should be. made it terribly hard to read and fully understand. however most of this poem was amazing. id give it a solid 90 outta 100.

A poem writin for nature herself, her beauty and your desire to protect her. It was a great nature piece, give yourself more credit my friend.

Very well done sir... shows true emotion for our beautiful land!

That... Is.... Just..... Amazing :D, its really nice and i like it alot :33