What a love poem? This is so sweet and romantic.
I like the way you described the feelings of the persona here and the way she love the girl in this poem. Nicely written. Keep writing:))
~C

''Her hair is black and long
Her eyes are dark brown''
Makes me think, she must be an Asian.
Yehh maybe she is an Asian dog hehhe.

Anyway, i like this poem. Simple yet elegant. Perfectly written.